"I can't believe you guys are charging us." Rihnay said, watching Chicki put stars on her nails.
Tiffany had Monic's head in the sink, rinsing out the shampoo. "Girl, it's a recession no one gets anything for free any more. Plus $15 is nothing compared to going to the professional shops."
Everyone could agree with that. It was 10 in the morning, on the Saturday of Coyia's Party, everyone was mad excited. Even Koca was getting her make-up done by Brittbrat.
"I can't believe your actually going to a party Koca." Brittbrat said.
"Yea me either, but Coyia is a sweet girl. So I thought I'd show my face."
"I hope all the boyz show up." Stacy said sitting on the couch waiting her turn to get her nails done.
"Yea we all know who you scoping for." Brianna said,as Tiffany signaled that she was next.
"Who you scoping for?" Gloria asked,watching BET on the T.V. in the living room.
"Miles, he's just oh so sexii." Stacy said.
"Really?" Joniesha said with amusement in her voice.
"Yea..what's wrong with him?" Stacy asked.
"Oh nothing." Joniesha said with a smirk on her face.
Stacy shrugged. "Anywayz I had saw him coming out the gym yesterday, and I almost ran into the math building."
Rihnay busted out laughing. "Are you serious?!!"
Stacy nodded. "It was embarrasing. He glanced over at me and just smiled, and I melted."
Koca rolled her eyes. "He's just another dude. I don't know why females praise men like their GODs"
"I don't know about them being GOD, but some can defintely send me to a heavenly place! Owwwwwww!" Tiffany said.
Chicki shook her head. "Tiffany, your ridiculous."
Tiffany just smiled. "Chicki, you're the last to talk. I heard about you sizing Jordy up in class."
"What?!" Krystal screamed. "ooooooh Chicki!"
Chicki reddened. "I was not!"
"Don't you go lying now Chicki. It's Okay to like Mr. Ricardo Frantino Pablo Fernando Martinez!"
Everyone fell out laughing. Chicki cracked a smile.
"Jordy is mad sexii tho." Samiyyah said, as she came out the kitchen munching on some chips. "You can defintely tell the man is from New York."
"With the spanish accent, he's perfect!" Jemi said, giving Chicki a wink.
"Ok guyz! Enough about Jordy!" Chicki said.
Everyone laughed again. Then stopped when they heard a knock at the door. Samiyyah went to the door, and opened it. Tori stood there looking uncomfortable.
"Um...hi." Tori said to her feet.
"Anyone knows this girl!" Samiyyah yelled.
Brianna said. "Yea, Tori come on in here girl."
Samiyyah opened the door, while smacking all up in Tori's ears. Tori scurried over to Brianna.
Britt glanced up. "Hey Tori. I'm Britt."
Tori nodded.
"Look around here, we may be loud, but most of us make pretty good friends. We all would love for you to open up more.You seem like a really nice girl."
Tori gave a small smile.
"See, there we go. Now after I'm done with Koca, you come on over to this chair. We're gonna have you looking fierce tonight."
Tori's smile widened. "Ok."
~Trey's dorm
Trey was in the mirror trying to lay his eyebrows down. "My damn eyebrows got a mind of their own!"
Miles laughed as he past the bathroom door. "Nigga you should of dodged that damn boomerang."
John laughed, as he sipped loudly from his sweet tea.
Trey shook his head. "Well I'm still sexy either way." Trey walked out of the bathroom, and into his room. He closed his door to finish getting dressed.
Kevin was in his room, singing to "Feinin" by Jodeci. He had just finished dressing, throwing a hat on his head was the perfect finish.
10 minutes later, Kevin heard a knock on his door. Kevin walked over to open it.
"Yo! We heading out. You riding with us?" John asked.
"Yea." Kevin grabbed his keys, and locked his door. "Let's roll"
~At the Velvet Room
Elizabeth walked in wearing this:
Her hair was in long dark curls, and she had on black pumps. She glanced around, she was one of the first to arrive. Coyia was on the stage saying something to the D.J. She glanced up, when she heard someone. Coyia walked over to Elizabeth wearing:
Her hair crinkled down her back.
"Hey! Elizabeth you're early!"
"Yea.I was too anxious to get out the house. We have what an hour?" Elizabeth asked.
Coyia nodded. "Yea, come help me set out the food if you don't mind."
"Sure."
~An hour later
The music was playing mad loud as Jay walked in wearing:
Her hair was weaved up, it was flat-ironed to flow down her back, she wore black heels that made her 5 inches taller. She flipped her hair over her shoulder as she glanced around. The club was filling up quick.
Nori came in after her wearing:
She had her hair pulled to the side in a curly ponytail.
Next came Domi, who was wearing:
She had the feather in her hair, while her swooped up into a fancy ponytail.
Franee followed in after her, wearing :
Her hair came down in shirley temple curls.
Coyia walked over to greet them.
"Wow ladies! Ya'll look great! Franee loving the colors!"
Franee posed as "Video phone" by Beyonce came on. "Girl I gotta show these men I ain't playing. You look nice in that red girl!"
Coyia smiled. "Thanks! Domi you working the feathers!"
Domi spun around. "Thanks!"
"Nori them kicks! Ohwee!"
Nori smiled. "I didn't really feel like wearing a dress, I don't boys trying to look up my skirt or nothing."
Coyia laughed. "Word. Alright ladies..go be social."
As they walked off to go dance, Christina walked in wearing:
Her hair was pinned up with two bow clips. She smiled as "Make Me Over" by Keyshia Cole came on. She loved this song she thought to herself. As she made her way onto the dance floor, Sheena entered the club.
She was wearing:
Her hair was flowing around her shoulder in loose curls. Dawn came in behind her wearing:
go & tell your friends that i'm obsessive & crazy; by »мegaη.ℓove♥ featuring Christian Louboutin shoes
Dawn had her hair pulled back in a tight bun, with a few loose curls around her face.
Sharon followed wearing:
Sharon's hair was pinned up so it only flowed over her left shoulder. Coyia greeted them.
"Well hello! Dang ya'll clean up nicely!" Coyia said.
Dawn smiled. "Girl we may not be on that high faship tip all the time, but we had to show ya'll how we get down forreal."
"I see." Coyia said. "There's punch over there." Coyia pointed to her right.
As they headed over for to get some punch. Taj walked in wearing:
Taj had just let her hair hand in its normal way. Coyia walked over to her.
"Glad you could make it!!"
"Yea. Me too." Taj said with a small smile, and made her way over to sit at a table.
Angelica came in next wearing:
Angel hair in a bob cut..but one side was longer than the other.
Coyia waved from across the room, and Angel waved back. As she made her way to the dance floor, she was immediatly asked to dance.
Ariel came in next wearing:
Ariel wasn't use to wearing heels, but Vivie had insisted. Ariel had her hair in loose curls around her shoulders.
Vivie came in behind her, wearing :
She had her hair up in a high pontail with two strains of hair in her face. She smoothed her hands over her hips.
"This skirt makes my ass look big?" Vivie asked Coyia as she walked over.
Coyia laughed.
"Yes."
"Perfect!" Vivie glanced around. "Any of the boys get here yet?"
"Not any from S.U. yet..no." Coyia answered.
Briittneebee came in next wearing:
Britt's hair framed her face in short curls. "Sorry Vivie, no sweet tea negroes here yet."
Vivie laughed. "Whatever. I'm ready to get my dance on anyway." Vivie said just as "Stanky Leg" by the G Spot Boyz came on. Vivie, and Ariel did the Stanky leg all the way to the dance floor. Ariel stumbled, and Brittneebee has to catch her from behind.
"Careful" Britt said.
"It's these damn heels!" Ariel said. Britt just laughed.
Next through the door was Monic. She was wearing:
She had her pinned to one side in tight curls, she started bouncing when she heard "All the Above" by Maino feat. T-Pain come on.
Sabrina came in next, wearing:
She had a hot pink and black fancy hat on her head. She had her hair rolled into to parts in the back of her head..so only little spikes of hair showed on either side of her hat.
Coyia smiled. "Monic those are some banging shoes, and Sabrina you look fabolous!"
"Thanks" Sabrina said, as BrittBrat made her way in wearing:
Britt had her hair in loose curls, with her hat that you see in the picture over her head.
"oooh!Britt!! You lookin fierce!" Coyia said.
Britt snapped. "You know it!"
Krystal came in next wearing:
She had half of her hair pinned up in the hump look as the rest hung down her back.
Coyia yelled over the music,as "Drop It Low" by Ester Dean feat. Chris Brown came on. "Them heels are fire Krys!"
As Krys thanked her, Tiffany came in yelling "This my jam!! Drop it Drop It Low!"
Tiffany was wearing :
Tiffany had her in a high ponytail, she was swinging it around as she danced in place.
Coyia laughed. "Tiff you look gorgeous!"
"Thanks gurl! This my Barbie outfit!" They laughed,as Joniesha came in wearing:
Joniesha had her hair flat-ironed over her shoulders. She joined Tiffany in dancing, and they both went wild when "Swag Surfing" came on by F.L.Y.
As they made there way to the dance floor, Gloria walked in wearing:
She had her hair in loose curls bouncing as she walked in. Stacy followed in wearing:
Brianna came in next wearing:
Both Brianna and Stacy had their hair flat-ironed and flowing around their shoulders.
Chicki came in next wearing:
She had her hair in tight curls to frame her face. Jemi followed in after her with her hair bouncing in a high ponytail wearing:
Rihany followed after her with a fresh new cut, her hair was in soft spikes. She wore:
Keisha came in smiling with her hair in curly layers wearing:
Natasha strolled in with her hair crinkled wearing:
Cierra came walking in like she was a model when "Your Heels" by Day 26 came on with her bouncy curls bouncing everywhere wearing:
Koca came in with her hair in tight bun with one curl in her face wearing:
She straightened her glasses as she took in the scene..she cringed at how packed the place was.
Samiyyah came in jerkin as "Your a Jerk" by the New boyz came on. Her hair flowed in long, loose curls. She was wearing:
Tori walked in slowly. Her hair was loose in tight curls. Brittbrat yelled. "Bring your sexy ass in here gurl!"
Tori blushed and continued to walk wearing:
Without that mimco hat.
Britbrat and crew started doing wolf whistles at Tori. Tori blushed but couldn't help but smile. Britt and Brianna grabbed each of her arms. "Let's dance!" Britt yelled.
The S.U. men came in as one big crowd. Trey lead the pack.
"Damn it's some sexii ass hoes in here." Trey said.
Najja walked past Trey, and walked over to the wall closest to the DJ booth. He leaned against the wall and watched.
Keon started jerkin, and yelled, "S.U.'s finest has arrived..let's get this party started."
The S.U. students roared.
As always Kudos!!! I abosolutely loved the visuals! Britt Brat's outfit is soooo her and so is everyone elses....Loving how you got me on my purple ish....can't wait for the party to really get started, lol.
ReplyDeletedamn shame! I look 15 ... i just can't win LMFAO a skank ass 15 year old .. i'm wit it oddly. haha
ReplyDeleteDamn my outfit has skank written all over it lmao it's all g...& imma get
ReplyDeleteTrey's ol extra self lol
I love how you put the pics in the story....the story already seemed real but the pics of the clothing brought it alive even more. BONG!!!!!
ReplyDeleteAwe man Jonie, you didnt leave out any details girl on the outfits. That was some fast & diligent research to find outfits to match everyone's personality. I loved it!
ReplyDeleteLove Love Love it.....The Fashion is definitely on point.
ReplyDeletethe outfits are cute, i want them ALL!
ReplyDeleteOk here I go again....logged in as the ttumandg person....but I did see another one where there was no comment, but those shouldn't count because that was when you were posting the chapters like back to back and I read them all at once so I just commented on the last chapter that I read at the time...now all these extra comments I'm making explaining myself after my victory dance on the character list post should def make up for those...I still think I deserve a platinum rose, lol.
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