Sunday, November 8, 2009

Chapter 21: Who Is this Transfer Student

Keon, Tahneisha, Frank,Franee,Redd,Jeremy, Domi, and Nori were all in one group. They walked into the first shop they saw.

"Oh! I love these Italian styles! We go look oh so fly!" said Domi.

"Yea, look at this!" Domi rushed over to Franee's side. Nori was walking around the store. She was wondering what would make her look more outgoing. She had to stop being so shy. She glanced up, and watched as Redd took his clothes to the cashier. Nori smiled. Men had is easy. They didn't have to try clothes to make sure they fit. She turned as a shirt caught her eye...she smiled. Perfect.

Tahneisha was standing next to Keon, as he glanced at hats.

"So Keon, got a girlfriend?" Tahneisha asked.

Keon glanced down at her. Tiffany and him had made it official before they had split. He hadn't had a steady girlfriend in a minute. Where was Tiffany? Should he call her?

"Hello?!" Tah said, waving her hand in Keon's face.

"Sorry, yea I have a girlfriend."

"Really? Is she here in Italy with us?"

"No..she's with the others."

Tahneisha smiled. "Ah I see." Tahneisha turned, and went to look for an outfit. She had her mind set on what she intended to do.

Franee came out of the dressing room wearing:


"What ya'll think?" Franee said spinning.

Frank glanced up from the magazine he had been reading. "Wow..orange is defintely your color."

Franee smiled, as Redd nodded in agreement.

Domi came out next wearing:


Franee smiled. "Domi that's hott!"

"I agree." said Keon. "That dress fits you nicely."

Domi looked at herself in the side mirror. "Yea Italy really fits me."

Franee laughed. Tahneisha walked out of her dressing room next, wearing:


Jeremy did a wolf whistle. "Damn Tahneisha!"

Frank glared at Jeremy. "Watch who you whistling at nigga."

Jeremy laughed. "Sorry."

Tahneisha rolled her eyes, and looked at Keon. Keon eyes were on her breast that she had purposely made to spill over the top of the dress. Tahneisha smiled.

"Keon?" Keon gazed up into Tah's eyes. "What you think about the outfit?"

"You look nice." Keon said. Then glanced away. Tahneisha did a victory dance inside her head, it was so much easier to seduce a man when he was already attracted to you.

Nori walked out last, wearing:


Everyone stared at Nori. Nori started to squirm as the silence prolonged.

"What?" she finally asked softly.

"Nori heffa! You killin that dress!" Franee said.

"Hell yea, Nori. You should defintely wear shit like this more often." Domi said.

Nori glanced down, and blushed.

"Come on. I'm hungry, we're suppose to meet the others at that restaurant on the end of this street." Jeremy said.

Everyone went to finish getting their clothes rung up. As Nori walked out first she felt someone touch her shoulder. She glanced over her shoulder, and Redd stood there.

"You look beautiful." Redd said.

Nori blushed. "Thanks." She said, as the others started to come out. Nori jumped as Redd took her hand, he smiled. Nori smiled back, and they walked hand and hand to the restaurant.

Koca, Elizabeth, Brandon, Najja, and Christina were in another group. Najja had already picked out his outfits, so had Brandon. They were sittin down waiting on the females. They had picked out their outfits, but they were deciding on which outfits to wear outside the store. Each of them was in a dressing room.

"These girls need to hurry up, my ass is hungry." Najja said, just as Christina walked out wearing:


She looked at herself in the mirror, she smiled. "Perfect!" she said as she smoothed her hands over her hips. Koca walked out next wearing:


Christina glanced over at her. "Koca, why do you always stay to the same conservative style? Even here in Italy you find the most conservative outfit. You need to open up more."

"Imma need for you to mind your business, and stop paying so much attention to what I'm wearing. thanks."

Christina rolled her eyes, and grabbed her bags. She walked outside the shop.

"For the record, I like your look." Brandon said.

Koca glanced at him. "Thanks." She said as she slid into the jacket. She grabbed her bags, and headed out the door also. Elizabeth walked out of her dressing room wearing:
Items in this set:
D&G dress, $151
Miu Miu shoes, $490
Fendi tote bag, 944 GBP
Fendi belt, $348
Roberto Cavalli bracelet, $234


She saw everyone walking out the door, she grabbed her bags, and gave one more look at herself in the mirror. She nodded, and followed the others.

Sheena, Dawn, and Sharon were in another group. They had already had purchased their clothes also. They had wanted to change out of the clothes they were wearing, and get into their new outfits a.s.a.p. Dawn walked out first wearing:


She looked in the mirror, and laughed. "You guys. I love this dress. The belt does wonders."

"I told you!" Sheena said, as she walked out of her dressing room wearing:




Dawn turned as Sheena walked out.

"Aww Sheena! You look gorgeous!" Dawn said.

"I know! I wonder if I can spark any of these Italian men's interest in this."

Sharon walked out of her dressing room laughing, she wore:


"Sharon you look like you're from here for real." Dawn said laughing.

Sharon smiled. "Yea yea..let's go! We need to get to the restaurant."

Angel, Tori, Brianna, Monic, Stacy, Gloria and Kevin were in the last group.

Angel walked out of her dressing room, like she was heaven on earth. She was wearing:


Angel posed in the mirror, she saw an Italian dude watching her. She waved, and he waved back. Angel went over to talk to him as Tori walked out wearing:


Brianna came out right after wearing:


She glanced over at Tori and sighed.

"Tori, out of all the outfits we just got you picked this one to wear?"

"What I think it's comfortable. I have no one to impress, and it's chilly outside."

Kevin nodded. "Yea it is cold outside."

"Shut up Kevin. I was just saying Tori."

Tori shrugged. Kevin stood up. "Well I think she looks nice. Women in sweats can look sexy too."

Tori smiled at Kevin. "Thank you!" Brianna shook her head. "I didn't say you didn't look nice, I was just trying to help."

"It's okay. I'll dress up when i feel the need." Tori said as Monic walked out wearing:


Monic glanced over at Tori. "Love the outfit, I was going to dress comfy too, but I decided against it."

Tori mumbled a thanks, as Monic went to grab her bags. "I'm outside waiting, hurry up ya'll, I'm so damn hungry."

Glori walked out her dressing room wearing:


"Them heels are too cute!" Brianna said.

"Thanks!" Gloria said, looking at herself in the mirror.

Stacy walked out wearing:


Tori smiled. "See! I'm not the only one dressing comfortable."

Stacy glanced at Tori. "Girl, and nothing wrong with a casual look. Watch me work the hell out of these jeans." Stacy grabbed her bags, and strutted her way out the door.

Tori bent down to pick up her bags. Kevin picked up two of them. Tori glanced up, "Uh thanks."

Kevin smiled, and walked out with Tori following behind her.

~~~~Back at Cayman Island, Tiffany was pacing her room. Brittbrat was dancing to "Rumors" by Keri Hilson, she had her headphones on, and just letting loose around the room.Sabrina was on her bed typing on her laptop. Joniesha was reading a book, as did Natasha. They were each leaning against their beds. Natasha glanced up over her glasses.

"Tiffany why don't you just call him?"

Tiffany glanced at Natasha. "I don't know maybe because I thought he would call first. Why hasn't he?"

"Maybe they don't have reception." Keisha said as she walked into the room wearing:


Everyone glanced at Keisha.

"Where the hell you been Keisha?" Natasha asked.

"Just walking the beach, talking to locals, and enjoying the weather."

"Is that a swimsuit you're wearing?" Brittbrat asked.

"Yea, but I decided to wear it as an outfit." Keisha said.

"Sounds like a skank move to me." Natasha said.

Keisha rolled her eyes. "Anywayz I was just visiting ya'll room to say hi. I'll talk to ya'll later."

Keisha walked out of the room. Tiffany sighed, and glanced at her cell phone sitting on her bed.

"Just do it." Joniesha said without glancing up from her book. Tiffany sighed, and walked over to her cell phone. she picked it up,and dialed Keon's number. After three rings he picked up.

"Hello?"

"Keon?"

"Tiffany! Hey! I was gonna call but we have no reception at the house, and then we been out and about all day."

"It's cool, Keon. Where are you?"

"Italy."

"Italy?!"

Everyone in the room repeated what Tiffany said.

"What the hell?! I love Italian men!!" Brittbrat said.

"Where ya'll at?"

"Cayman Island."

"Ya'll on an island?"

"Yea. what's all that noise I hear?"

"We are at some restaurant, and everyone in here chatting away."

Tiffany heared a woman ask Keon he wanted to taste her spaghetti, and heard Keon politely say no.

"Who the hell is that?"

"Tahneisha."

"Who?"

"She's a transfer from-"

"Anyone in here know a transfer of the name Tahniesha?"

Everyone in Tiffany's room shook their heads.

"Keon, I don't trust women I don't know."

"Babe. You really have nothing to worry about."

"Yea I hope so."

"For this relationship to work you have to trust me."

Tiffany sat down on her bed, and let out a breath. "I know."

"I miss you." Keon said in a low voice.

Tiffany leaned back against the wall, and closed her eyes. "I miss you too. I'm not use to feeling this protective over a dude."

Keon laughed. "With a woman like you for a girlfriend i think I can talk as much shyt as kanye west, and don't have to worry about getting shot."

Tiffany laughed with him. "Please be careful out there, and watch out for...well the skanks."

Keon laughed. "Yea..and stay away from the buff ass beach boys."

Joniesha watched as Tiffany hung up with Keon. "So who's Tahneisha?"

"A female that I had heard in the background, she's a transfer to our school. He says she's no threat. But we shall see."

~~~~Vivie was out walking the beach, she had always wanted to come to a place like this. As she glanced out at the ocean, she heard footsteps behind her. She turned around, and saw John standing there.

"Hi." John said.

"Hi." Vivie said.

John looked out at the ocean. "This place is real nice. It's peaceful."

Vivie nodded. "Yea." She stared at John's face as he stared at the ocean.

"You're making it really hard for me to try to make this relationship work."

Vivie's eyes widened. What was he talking about? They didn't have a relationship. "What?"

"Me and Diamond. We are having issues, and we are trying to make it work. I'm trying not to see her many flaws, but that's hard when I have a better woman to compare her to."

Vivie stared at him. John glanced down at her. "Being on an island in the middle of nowhere, doesn't help either."

"Well i'm not going to force you to do anything you don't wanna do." Vivie said.

John took a step closer to her. Vivie's heart sped up with each step he took closer, until he stood right in front of her.

"What if I want to?"

Vivie swallowed, hard. " Want to do what?" Vivie's voice came out in a whisper.

John didn't speak, he just put his hand on her hip, and yanked her to him. Then he placed his lips on hers. Vivie's nails dug into John's shoulders, as his tongue slid into her mouth. Vivie at the moment was the happiest female on earth.
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2 comments:

  1. PrettieBirdieNovember 8, 2009 at 10:32 PM

    BONG!!!! Oh oh Vivie!!! I know she's smiling from ear to ear, lol. Love the story as always...and how come I can always sense when it's been posted? I woke up and checked for it and it had literally been posted 15 minutes proir, lol. As always I can't wait to see where this is going and where the heck ws Keisha, lol?

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  2. AnomalyNovember 9, 2009 at 5:54 AM

    POW!! Oh oh Vivie is right (from Chicki) *giggles* now she can't be getting on me cuz I get more screen time. Lights, camera, ACTION <_< She actually got further than I've ever gotten in 21 damn chapters so she better hush up. LOL. and Keish is random as shit lol. Chick come outta nowhere and then disappears again. That's funny. and ooooh do I sense a murder in the works. mhm. Tah better watchout.

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